Sunday 19 December 2010

IMAGIST VERSE

Imagists 

Image” that ..unique instant of time.. the presentation of which gives a sense of sudden liberation; a sense of freedom from time ... and space .. that sense ... experienced in the presence of works of art..unrepeatable.. tangible to the moment.. to present one Image in a lifetime better than volumes of wordplay

the use clear, simple language to paint a picture. 
Imagery, on the other hand, is use of flowery and descriptive language, and often figurative language, to create an image in the reader’s mind. An imagist would keep things simple, and not use imagery other than specific sensory details.


EXAMPLES OF MY IMAGIST VERSE

Here are some of mine 

 *** 
 (senryu) where ever he looks 
 Mona Lisa's gaze follows- 
 his every step 
======
(hi-ku) 
 on the wind 
 a bell tolls- 
 memories surface
 === 
mon-o-ku
 carol concert prelude- 
                       chatter of innocents 
***
 (couplet) a broken heart no words could save 
 death's red poppy petals her grave 
*** 
 (kimo)
 on fresh earth 
the ashphatel lily lies 
 a bay leaf crumbles &dies 
 we each change but..in death 
***
 (american doublet) 
 I brush a tall primrose in early bloom 
 on the evening breeze..a yellow perfume 
***
 (imagist) 
 all around..the silence of an empty house
 ****
 (rhyme) 
 Passion the first kiss of love's bliss  
could lips be soft like this 
*** 
 (spaces)
 a brief encounter 


 a marriage of convenience 
 ***
 (ekphrasis-seurat)
 small dots before our eyes 
 the picture we devise
 *** 
 (kuhlman -
spring) 
 Come Day:warmth,white,blooms:play
 *** 
 (tercet) 
 When ,she and I become we
 True love for us,may not be-
 'til I love her,who loves me
 *** 
 (alliterate) 
dull 
dank 
December day- 
devastation's depression 
 descends 
*** 
 (bantu) 
 A sea mist rolls inshore this morning 
The optician proposes a cataract op 
*** 
 (tristich) 
 Wardrobes, full of clothes, 
 crossstitch cluttered walls- 
her shadow still clouds my mind 
*** 
(epigram) 
 at ease on my bookshelf- yesterday's leisured hours 
**
(crystalline) 
 daisy buttercup yellow cowslip  
together mix in fellowship 
*** 
 (septimal)
 was 
Seurat 
 making a point 
*** 
 (emily) 
 Thee&Me
 free by a sacrifice- 
 a sacrifice for free
 *** 
 (fulton)
 Short Lived 
 M A Y 
 F L Y 
 D A Y 
 *** 
 (p s) 
 Last Gasp 
 a 
 winning
 formula
 *** 
(elegy) 
 still beauty in her stare 
 but she was not there
 *** 
 (snowball)
 I 
 to 
 you 
 avow 
 *** 
 (dodoitsu) 
 a delicate petalled rose 
flutters slowly from on high, 
upon the green sward,to lie-
 dying sans a sigh

NOTE Imagists use clear, simple language to paint a picture. Imagery, on the other hand, is use of flowery and descriptive language, and often figurative language, to create an image in the reader’s mind. An imagist would keep things simple, and not use imagery other than specific sensory details.

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